Tuesday, May 15, 2007

when love sours.....

when love turns sour
and the heart grows cold

when the fire dies out
in a deluge of demented tears

when words wound
and we bleed

bitter lovers
that is what it makes us

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

beg to differ again. there aint anything called bitter love nor is it appropriate to call someone bitter lover/s. love is undoubtedly the sweetest emotion known to human species. pity its also the one that causes worst of pains. i would still call it sweet no matter how much i let it hurt me. love is that one thing that can make you wish for pain, that makes you wonder if u r alive or dead, its a feeling so sweet yet so painful that literary is at loss of words to elaborate.

Do Do Shakle Dikhtee Hain Is Bahekese Aayine Mein
Mere Saath Chala Aaya Hai Aapka Ek Saudayi Bhi

gypsy said...

OK, lets agree to disagree. Maybe it is because i am a bitter person at times that i feel love can be bitter. And i am a bitter lover at times. Love is a sweet emotion but it has other sides to it too. Oh yes, i have seen love at its purest; but then i have seen its dark sides too. Maybe you would say the emotion is not love anymore if it is not pure and sweet. But love can spawn so emotions that are not pretty.

Lets both live with our own definitions. After all, an emotion is what you make out of it and not how others define it.

Anonymous said...

i agree.